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10月12日托福獨立寫作真題范文:那些“偷來”的時間,應該做什么?
2019-10-28 18:53   作者:新航道   閱讀量:

  持續推送近期托??荚嚜毩懽鞣段慕馕?/strong>,每篇范文都由專業寫作團隊編寫校對,帶你了解最實用的寫作范文。寫作能力,就是在一點一點的積累中提高的。

  

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  2019.10.12(下午) 獨立寫作題目

  “Which of the following do you think students should do during their free time of the night?

  1、Do work through which they gain work experience, such as a part-time job or volunteering;

  2、Learn sporting skills;

  3、Learn to play a musical instrument

  ”

  寫作范文

  審題時注意:如果把想法集中在選項上,思路會局限。相反,要充分利用問題部分的情景設置:the night

  【本文立場:選3】

  Introduction

  略

  Body

  全篇的論證結構:同時否定選項1和2成為獨立的一個段落。

  首先針對選項1讓步?!?Earning an income may be the immediate consideration among the students who choose to do part-time jobs. Meanwhile, a volunteering job, although it does not pay, helps students to gain work experience and to build a social network. 接下來的考慮是:接著寫對于選項2的讓步,還是先用轉折把選項1否定掉。最好是趕緊轉著否定,否則的話,讓步內容會冗長?!? However, work, paid or unpaid, is exhausting. 接下來順延著把選項1和2共同的劣勢說完?!?In fact, it is the same case with learning sporting skills. Although sports strengthen our body, they consume energy, which should be saved for the next day’s study. 然后,分別否定選項1和2?!?strong>In addition, many jobs are available off campus, and when they finish at the late night, students have to travel distances during the night, and their safety and security is uncertain. 接下來討論sports的時候,可以和jobs建立邏輯關系,避免流水賬一樣的討論?!?Although students do not have to leave the campus to learn sports, many sports require daylight, or proper weather or facilities that are unavailable during the night. 反駁時,也可以舉例(舉例不是僅僅可用于立論)?!?For instance, playing tennis is impossible unless there is good lighting and a good weather, and seldom can a person swim in an outdoor pool in the freezing temperature.

  全篇的論證結構:另外一個單獨的段落討論選項3:對比與選項1和2的優勢,以及自己的益處。

  Unlike doing a job, particularly a job for money, and doing sports, playing a musical instrument is easy, consuming less strength or energy. 通過邏輯鏈接,迅速引出關于益處的討論?!?In fact, it may be quite relaxing. 接下來舉例論證可能是論證的最佳選擇?!?  Last semester, when I was learning piano, the melodious sounds were delightful, creating a lot of pleasure for the night, and every time, I woke up the next morning revitalized. 接下來討論益處的第二點。略。

  Conclusion

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