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雅思大作文高分范文:其實,經濟和環境可以平衡!
2019-09-24 15:37   作者:新航道   閱讀量:

97日大作文題目

Some people say that the economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger; while some say that economic growth is harmful to the environment, so we must stop it now.

 

Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.


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高分范文

Although pharmaceutical sales make trillions of dollars every year, it is unfair to say that pharmaceutical companies rake in money and do nothing else. As a matter of fact, many of the companies fare with good ethics and global citizenship, and are rather generous in developing medications to help poor countries. That does not conflict with their business nature. 

 

 

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Admittedly, economic growth needs to exploit energy and build plants which may produce pollution and damage the environment 措辭方式/說法可以變一變→ pollution often comes with economic growth, and humans often rob the environment of natural resources 動詞概念更形象For instance, in some countries, severe deforestation is attributed to ←動詞是句子的核心,選用這個動詞詞組,會讓人誤解為句子想表達的是因果關系,其實肯定想表達的是發生了什么不好的事情,所以用→ happens because of excessive logging for constructing houses 當動詞后的賓語不明確的時候,把動詞變成名詞→ construction or manufacturing. However, it does not mean that economic growth should be stopped. As a matter of fact, recent years have witnessed a growing trend that countries developing green economy, and such as using clean energy and producing energy-saved energy-efficient machines those counties have seen a harmonious relation between the development of economy and environmental preservation. 措辭方式/說法可以變一變 is promoted in recent years and the awareness of protecting environment is improved among people.

 

 

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In fact, it is only when a nation has enough wealth that the nation’s people do not struggle with poverty or hunger. ← 強調原因狀語的強調句。economic growth can promote the development of productivity. When the economy is booming grows, a country may have enough resource to allocate to each individual citizen. Having enough resource, individuals can lead a proper life. ← 道理很簡單,說不了太多的時候,補充一句到兩句(不能更多)的例子 → For example, China is reducing poverty through its increasingly prosperous economy, and rarely do the developed countries have the problem of poverty despite their insignificantly small poor populations. companies will spend more money on technology and add more productive lines which help to cultivate high productive breed and produce more grain. For instance, Chinese companies get much financial support due to booming economy, so they develop high yield rice which eradicates starvation in many areas. So if it is in a down economy, companies will not have money to do that. What is more In addition, employment growth 動詞是句子的核心,選用這個動詞詞組,會讓人誤解為句子想表達的是因果關系,其實肯定想表達的是經濟發展,所以用→ grows is attributed to as a result of economic growth. When every individual has a job that pays well, how would it be possible that they are poor? 措辭方式的靈活,用反問句表達陳述句的意思。Simultaneously, people cannot deny that a job bring income and it may let them get rid of poverty. For example, in 2008 financial crisis, the economies of many countries had been hit hard and their unemployment rate rose sharply which lead to a large number of people on the verge of poverty. So, only economic growth can solve poverty and starvation. Meanwhile, hunger will be eliminated with the development of economy. In some countries, with agrarian economy – the agricultural sector of the economy –developing, their populations are well fed ← be fed是形象的措辭。by their agriculture. 

 

 

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In conclusion, although the development of economy will lead may cause some environment problems, people are trying their best to decrease influence the damage is being minimized. At the same time Instead, people must choose the way of developing rely on the growth of economy to end as the only solution to poverty and famine for the three reasons mentioned because high productivity and employment are necessary to solve those questions. 當主體部分的概念很難被濃縮為詞匯的時候,就干脆籠統總結全文。

 

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